Friday, 13 May 2016

Personification paragraph

This google drawing consists of a picture prompt and a paragraph. I have created this with my partner Sajiha. Our focus was to use the 5 senses and personification to help paint a picture in our readers mind with words. We each wrote a sentence and had 15 minutes to complete our paragraph 

1 comment:

  1. A wonderful picture painted with words girls. I really like the inclusion of rhetorical questions, as the reader they make you think about what the poor shoes are going through. Well done!