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Tuesday 1 March 2016

Drafting with Nazella

Here is my stretched sentence. I also created a draft ( Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix, Talk) version. I worked collaborative with my friend Nazella. We both appreciated sharing our ideas to make a greater difference.


The wolf howled in the deeply dark forest at midnight when the moonlight struck him.

At midnight, the wolf howled in the deeply illuminated forest, when the moonlight struck him.


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