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Wednesday, 13 July 2016

Day 6 - Winter Learning Journey

For day 6 I have been asked to: Imagine that you are sitting in the crowd at the opening ceremonies for the Rio Olympics this August. The ceremony has just started and all of the Olympic athletes are parading around the stadium in their uniforms when all of a sudden…
In your blog, write an ending to this short story. It should be approximately 10-20 sentences long.

The ceremony has just started and all of the Olympic athletes are parading around the stadium in their uniforms when all of a sudden… the ground shakes simultaneously you hear a thunderous, clamorous and deafening booms but not just one, 3 bombs had exploded. Along with it are wails and petrifying screams of people.
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown22 July 2016 at 15:46

    Oh my goodness, Zeba, this is such a dramatic story! You have left me sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next. Can you please add a few more sentences to your story so that we know how it all ends? In order to earn the full 20 points for this activity you will need to write between 10 and 20 sentences for your story. Are you able to do that for us? We'd love to know more about what happens next and be able to award you full points for the activity!

    Cheers, Rachel :)

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  2. Nesi22 July 2016 at 23:01

    Hi Zeba, I really want to find out what happens next. Maybe you should add more sentences. Great Work.

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  3. aminiasi24 July 2016 at 10:32

    Hello Zeba, WOW! Your story was cool I had a clear picture in my mind on what was happening. I feel like I want to read more.

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